Post by Gabriel Van Helsing on Nov 8, 2005 3:22:39 GMT -5
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Author: HughJackmanFan
Rating: T .- adventure/horror/supernatural
Disclaimer I don’t own Van Helsing. The Character: Cardinals, monks, Van Helsing, Dracula and Stephen Sommers, this words from movie and screenplay to owner Universal Studios.
Summary: It’s my beginner novel and I bring my idea of character Van Helsing, his life is survive and his memory lost, he search for the answerEhe Cardinal helps him. This story was little bit from history and I give to mix another story of Vlad to Archangel Gabriel, my idea is good. =) Wallachia is true story of Vlad lll his military governor of Transylvania.
Van Helsing: In Search for the answers
Prologue:
October 31st, 1462: in Wallachia, Romania
The final battle war of the last Wallachia ancestor Vlad Tepes, he is such a great warrior and he was Prince of Wallachia. The people from his homeland Wallachia, they believed Tepes is the Devil of the Son and called him “Dracula TepesE Why did they called him? Tepes wasn’t believe the God’s work and he gotten himself life for the Devil, he started by killing enemies peoples and failed them but Vlad is strict disposer.
What was named “TepesE It’s named in Romanian “stakeEand of course, the Vampire Hunter Gabriel Van Helsing, he does same after 400 years agoE
Flashback
“Finally, you come!ETepes grinned evil
Flashback end
The battlefield was full and army fought with the Turkish army, but one dispose wasn’t there. Who was won on the battlefield? It was the Wallachia army,Tepes and proud of the country and lost of Turkey. Failed this war of conquest and Hungary helped with Transylvania army and made the power of the Order of the dragon, Vlad was member of the Order of the dragon. The ring ancestor with emblem dragon of the right hand. This was true history, one man was an Angel and nameless Archangel fought too same battlefield. Tepes wasn’t Vampire and not the Son of the Devil, he was still the disposer. But the Village people said, ‘Tepes is awful murder and horrific scene of death people on the stake with headless. We called him “DraculEEOn the field filled the darkest bloody from death warriors, the boots are dirty with blood and the cloths are dirty too of the blood, one screamed male of the pain. The death was Vlad Tepes, Vlad fell on the bloody field with the sharpen sword on the chest of heart.
He really was death with darkest pupil’s eyes and open eyes couldn’t moved. His body was cold and deathly pale skins.
The Archangel praise for the God’s work and left his death body, Archangel was disappeared from the sky.
The sergeant saw all that who killed by Vlad Tepes, he was swore about the God’s work but the army wasn’t believe him and he won’t existed but he lift the one white-gray feather from bloody field. He swore his old story of the war and he wrote on the diary book to the future of the world.
Flashback
The Archangel killed with his the sword to Vlad’s chest, Vlad screamed loud of the pain.
“No, this cannot be!EVlad yelled
“You must be the Son of the Devil!EArchangel commanded to Vlad
“unfair!!”Vlad broke his pain of the death
“Ne-verEbroke his lower voice.
“May he rest in peaceEArchangel said softly and whispered to Vlad’s ear “I really so sorry!EVlad doesn’t answered and was death now, he covered Vlad’s eyes and saw one man who come from the way.
Flashback end
The sergeant and his army made the big obsequies with Vlad’s death, his funeral was secret and the way wasn’t there. Never know, where was he on the funeral. The Village people wanted to know where’s the funeral and nobody said about it. Maybe people feared to back the Dracula, if he doesn’t death when he was drank with blood in since killed by the victims. What was the power of the life with healing body? Unlikely standing the funeral from outside behind the secret door in the Castle Bran. One day laid the black coffin under the catacombs, when the priest came into and he wanted saw Vlad’s body and he was believed before he heard the story about the Son of the Devil. He noticed the coffin was close with heavy lock and never opened it. At the midnight ring the clock bell at the twelve times. Vlad slept with deathly body but he could to feel his vein when blood worked harder into the whole veins and his heart pounded low and more then fast flooding into the body. Vlad croaked his air and breathed in small warmly air, he still alive! The priest looks the clock, but he couldn’t hear Vlad’s breath and he turns his back from the black coffin and stares at the cover, the cover clattered little in the seconds time and he frighten pretty scary, he won’t opened the heavy lock but he turns again towards chamber, he whispered small voice “God, I can’t think it. Requiescat in paceEsudden Vlad stands by the priest’s back.
“How long been it? Was I died?EVlad whispered to priest’s ear.
The priest frighten very deathly shock and turns slow his back to Vlad, he stares to him.
“Oh my God!!!Ehe shouted.
“Nice that you see, who am I? Should you call me as the Count Dracula?EVlad asked quickly.
“I-I-don’t kn-owE-wi-sh you, Vladi-lausE he stammered and his heart attacked of his health and he could died, his last word said:
“DraguliEaEhe fell in the death with eyes opened wide.
Vlad was clear and he doesn’t gave the real name, just called better Vladilaus Dragulia.
His body worked very harder and transformed his skins and saw very grayish pale , his back grows slow the wings, when Vlad screamed of the pain and he could to cried his beautiful life and his memories was in last war. He’s still forever life and no heartbeat, he laughed louder and he saw an Archangel from the small windows and he groaned and hissed to Archangel.
“Who are you?Ehe hissed loud
“You don’t remember from last night?EArchangel announced.
A scream of hissing and he flies out to the small windows, Archangel fell out on the floor.
“Good boy, Vladilaus!Ehe shouted.
A larger wings flies into the air of the dark night sky beside the full moon lighted very brighten.
Vlad wanted a the Castle and he searched anywhere elseEo Transylvania?
The Archangel followed to Vlad but doesn’t caught him and he need to watch everywhere.
Vlad knew when Archangel came with us, he could to hide on the trees. The Archangel landed at the forest and looks around the trees, the color of the trees are darker grayish peels. A loud of the voice with hissing Vlad jumped on the floor.
“Nice wingsE Vlad noticed to Archangel’s wings “isn’t beautiful, right?Estepped one “white-gray, I love yours color.EVlad smiles.
“What are you talking?EArchangel in questionable
“I don’t know, what is your name? Mister?EVlad wanted to know.
“I’ve no memory, Mr. TepesEArchangel answered.
“Don’t call me Tepes. Tepes is death! I am Count Vladilaus Dragulia.EVlad bowed few short and started again answering.
“Are you Michael or Gabriel? You like such an Archangel of the God’s work. I know you’re the God and you aren’t human. You see yours wings! I hate the God and I am the Son of the Devil. What did I like that? Yes, I am bloodsucker and I am forever life!EVlad spoke in end words.
“You can to read in my mind, VladEArchangel said.
“Because your name is Gabriel, I read your mind.EVlad smirked.
“Yes, my name is Gabriel Van Helsing.EHe answered and his memory lost in past one days.
“Van Helsing?EVlad spat “You’re insane! Here is fourteen sixty two yearE
Gabriel doesn’t answered, Vlad laughed loud.
“Insane, Gabriel!EVlad laughed and flies to disappear into the airs.
One day laterE
November 1st 1642,End Game in Dracula’s Portal
In the brighten color of red to oranges picture likes the flames, hot and deathly fire danced around and bigger flames spats out into higher air, nobody stand the things: no trees, no cloudy, no leafs, no animal, no insects, only two human on the earth of the portal.
It’s open land, but no the color seen around red, yellow, red blood and oranges painting are nightmares and horrific scenes in battlefield.
The fog of the smoke danced to two men’s face, both fought harder and cannot quite by fight.
“We could be friends. Partners! Brothers-in-arms!EVlad shouted.
But nothing spoke the words and both fought again with the blade swords, one other spears and the Battle axe on the hands. On the portal room heard a loud of the scream with two men’s voice, the level is higher who like the mountain and a circle platform. Both played like the cats and mouse game, they fenced the swords who like the pirates and began to talk,
“Do you not understand from last night?EVlad shouted and continued his voice higher
“NE-VER! I WANT LIFE!E
No word more than Gabriel still quite stunned and taken out his hand with sword again fenced to Vlad. No heard a pain, we fought more times and the time was later, the sky was deep of the painting wall. Gabriel look Vlad’s ring finger with huge ring and shouted him, but the sky thunder loud and we cannot heard the words.
“I WANT TO HAVE YOUR RING!EGabriel’s voice high and holds his sword.
“WHY? WHAT DID YOU WANT?EVlad shouted back and holds his Battle axe.
Both weapons are together adhered, Gabriel and Vlad are strong of the power, then Vlad shoved and Gabriel fell on the floor and watch out when Vlad swings his Battle axe to Gabriel’s shoulder, he avoided and again back, Vlad annoyed and his power is low and tried again hit to Gabriel’s shoulder. His pain screamed and his left upper arm was wounded, his skin was ugly opened but it was flesh wound. And Vlad laugh and talked him
“Never hit me! You loser!EVlad triumphed his proud and Vlad lift his Battle axe high and wanted to hit to Gabriel, sudden split second Gabriel’s sword twinge to Vlad’s belly and he screamed anger of the pain, his Battle axe fell down from Vlad’s empty-handed.
“I told you, Vlad! Your are the Son of the Devil and you’re a vampire. I know!EGabriel holds his sword to Vlad’s belly, the blood flow slow more and Gabriel’s hands are full blood. Vlad couldn’t answered but his mouth opened and croaked his breath and fell backwards on the floor, Gabriel taken his sword and look Vlad’s finger ring and cut the finger ring.
what did you think about?
how long is the post in character text? over 1000 words? If nothing working and I post more thread.
Let's go:
Author: HughJackmanFan
Rating: T .- adventure/horror/supernatural
Disclaimer I don’t own Van Helsing. The Character: Cardinals, monks, Van Helsing, Dracula and Stephen Sommers, this words from movie and screenplay to owner Universal Studios.
Summary: It’s my beginner novel and I bring my idea of character Van Helsing, his life is survive and his memory lost, he search for the answerEhe Cardinal helps him. This story was little bit from history and I give to mix another story of Vlad to Archangel Gabriel, my idea is good. =) Wallachia is true story of Vlad lll his military governor of Transylvania.
Van Helsing: In Search for the answers
Prologue:
October 31st, 1462: in Wallachia, Romania
The final battle war of the last Wallachia ancestor Vlad Tepes, he is such a great warrior and he was Prince of Wallachia. The people from his homeland Wallachia, they believed Tepes is the Devil of the Son and called him “Dracula TepesE Why did they called him? Tepes wasn’t believe the God’s work and he gotten himself life for the Devil, he started by killing enemies peoples and failed them but Vlad is strict disposer.
What was named “TepesE It’s named in Romanian “stakeEand of course, the Vampire Hunter Gabriel Van Helsing, he does same after 400 years agoE
Flashback
“Finally, you come!ETepes grinned evil
Flashback end
The battlefield was full and army fought with the Turkish army, but one dispose wasn’t there. Who was won on the battlefield? It was the Wallachia army,Tepes and proud of the country and lost of Turkey. Failed this war of conquest and Hungary helped with Transylvania army and made the power of the Order of the dragon, Vlad was member of the Order of the dragon. The ring ancestor with emblem dragon of the right hand. This was true history, one man was an Angel and nameless Archangel fought too same battlefield. Tepes wasn’t Vampire and not the Son of the Devil, he was still the disposer. But the Village people said, ‘Tepes is awful murder and horrific scene of death people on the stake with headless. We called him “DraculEEOn the field filled the darkest bloody from death warriors, the boots are dirty with blood and the cloths are dirty too of the blood, one screamed male of the pain. The death was Vlad Tepes, Vlad fell on the bloody field with the sharpen sword on the chest of heart.
He really was death with darkest pupil’s eyes and open eyes couldn’t moved. His body was cold and deathly pale skins.
The Archangel praise for the God’s work and left his death body, Archangel was disappeared from the sky.
The sergeant saw all that who killed by Vlad Tepes, he was swore about the God’s work but the army wasn’t believe him and he won’t existed but he lift the one white-gray feather from bloody field. He swore his old story of the war and he wrote on the diary book to the future of the world.
Flashback
The Archangel killed with his the sword to Vlad’s chest, Vlad screamed loud of the pain.
“No, this cannot be!EVlad yelled
“You must be the Son of the Devil!EArchangel commanded to Vlad
“unfair!!”Vlad broke his pain of the death
“Ne-verEbroke his lower voice.
“May he rest in peaceEArchangel said softly and whispered to Vlad’s ear “I really so sorry!EVlad doesn’t answered and was death now, he covered Vlad’s eyes and saw one man who come from the way.
Flashback end
The sergeant and his army made the big obsequies with Vlad’s death, his funeral was secret and the way wasn’t there. Never know, where was he on the funeral. The Village people wanted to know where’s the funeral and nobody said about it. Maybe people feared to back the Dracula, if he doesn’t death when he was drank with blood in since killed by the victims. What was the power of the life with healing body? Unlikely standing the funeral from outside behind the secret door in the Castle Bran. One day laid the black coffin under the catacombs, when the priest came into and he wanted saw Vlad’s body and he was believed before he heard the story about the Son of the Devil. He noticed the coffin was close with heavy lock and never opened it. At the midnight ring the clock bell at the twelve times. Vlad slept with deathly body but he could to feel his vein when blood worked harder into the whole veins and his heart pounded low and more then fast flooding into the body. Vlad croaked his air and breathed in small warmly air, he still alive! The priest looks the clock, but he couldn’t hear Vlad’s breath and he turns his back from the black coffin and stares at the cover, the cover clattered little in the seconds time and he frighten pretty scary, he won’t opened the heavy lock but he turns again towards chamber, he whispered small voice “God, I can’t think it. Requiescat in paceEsudden Vlad stands by the priest’s back.
“How long been it? Was I died?EVlad whispered to priest’s ear.
The priest frighten very deathly shock and turns slow his back to Vlad, he stares to him.
“Oh my God!!!Ehe shouted.
“Nice that you see, who am I? Should you call me as the Count Dracula?EVlad asked quickly.
“I-I-don’t kn-owE-wi-sh you, Vladi-lausE he stammered and his heart attacked of his health and he could died, his last word said:
“DraguliEaEhe fell in the death with eyes opened wide.
Vlad was clear and he doesn’t gave the real name, just called better Vladilaus Dragulia.
His body worked very harder and transformed his skins and saw very grayish pale , his back grows slow the wings, when Vlad screamed of the pain and he could to cried his beautiful life and his memories was in last war. He’s still forever life and no heartbeat, he laughed louder and he saw an Archangel from the small windows and he groaned and hissed to Archangel.
“Who are you?Ehe hissed loud
“You don’t remember from last night?EArchangel announced.
A scream of hissing and he flies out to the small windows, Archangel fell out on the floor.
“Good boy, Vladilaus!Ehe shouted.
A larger wings flies into the air of the dark night sky beside the full moon lighted very brighten.
Vlad wanted a the Castle and he searched anywhere elseEo Transylvania?
The Archangel followed to Vlad but doesn’t caught him and he need to watch everywhere.
Vlad knew when Archangel came with us, he could to hide on the trees. The Archangel landed at the forest and looks around the trees, the color of the trees are darker grayish peels. A loud of the voice with hissing Vlad jumped on the floor.
“Nice wingsE Vlad noticed to Archangel’s wings “isn’t beautiful, right?Estepped one “white-gray, I love yours color.EVlad smiles.
“What are you talking?EArchangel in questionable
“I don’t know, what is your name? Mister?EVlad wanted to know.
“I’ve no memory, Mr. TepesEArchangel answered.
“Don’t call me Tepes. Tepes is death! I am Count Vladilaus Dragulia.EVlad bowed few short and started again answering.
“Are you Michael or Gabriel? You like such an Archangel of the God’s work. I know you’re the God and you aren’t human. You see yours wings! I hate the God and I am the Son of the Devil. What did I like that? Yes, I am bloodsucker and I am forever life!EVlad spoke in end words.
“You can to read in my mind, VladEArchangel said.
“Because your name is Gabriel, I read your mind.EVlad smirked.
“Yes, my name is Gabriel Van Helsing.EHe answered and his memory lost in past one days.
“Van Helsing?EVlad spat “You’re insane! Here is fourteen sixty two yearE
Gabriel doesn’t answered, Vlad laughed loud.
“Insane, Gabriel!EVlad laughed and flies to disappear into the airs.
One day laterE
November 1st 1642,End Game in Dracula’s Portal
In the brighten color of red to oranges picture likes the flames, hot and deathly fire danced around and bigger flames spats out into higher air, nobody stand the things: no trees, no cloudy, no leafs, no animal, no insects, only two human on the earth of the portal.
It’s open land, but no the color seen around red, yellow, red blood and oranges painting are nightmares and horrific scenes in battlefield.
The fog of the smoke danced to two men’s face, both fought harder and cannot quite by fight.
“We could be friends. Partners! Brothers-in-arms!EVlad shouted.
But nothing spoke the words and both fought again with the blade swords, one other spears and the Battle axe on the hands. On the portal room heard a loud of the scream with two men’s voice, the level is higher who like the mountain and a circle platform. Both played like the cats and mouse game, they fenced the swords who like the pirates and began to talk,
“Do you not understand from last night?EVlad shouted and continued his voice higher
“NE-VER! I WANT LIFE!E
No word more than Gabriel still quite stunned and taken out his hand with sword again fenced to Vlad. No heard a pain, we fought more times and the time was later, the sky was deep of the painting wall. Gabriel look Vlad’s ring finger with huge ring and shouted him, but the sky thunder loud and we cannot heard the words.
“I WANT TO HAVE YOUR RING!EGabriel’s voice high and holds his sword.
“WHY? WHAT DID YOU WANT?EVlad shouted back and holds his Battle axe.
Both weapons are together adhered, Gabriel and Vlad are strong of the power, then Vlad shoved and Gabriel fell on the floor and watch out when Vlad swings his Battle axe to Gabriel’s shoulder, he avoided and again back, Vlad annoyed and his power is low and tried again hit to Gabriel’s shoulder. His pain screamed and his left upper arm was wounded, his skin was ugly opened but it was flesh wound. And Vlad laugh and talked him
“Never hit me! You loser!EVlad triumphed his proud and Vlad lift his Battle axe high and wanted to hit to Gabriel, sudden split second Gabriel’s sword twinge to Vlad’s belly and he screamed anger of the pain, his Battle axe fell down from Vlad’s empty-handed.
“I told you, Vlad! Your are the Son of the Devil and you’re a vampire. I know!EGabriel holds his sword to Vlad’s belly, the blood flow slow more and Gabriel’s hands are full blood. Vlad couldn’t answered but his mouth opened and croaked his breath and fell backwards on the floor, Gabriel taken his sword and look Vlad’s finger ring and cut the finger ring.
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